this is my first uni vid, i have ride for 1 year and 3 months
The riding seems to be quite good but the filming and editing wasn’t from my point of view. You should not have used half of the clips from that quite boring location when in the other clips it looks like there are lots of great spots. In the night clip i could hardly see anything. Because there are almost no ambient noises you should not have used the audio line.
Please note that this is only my opinion and maybe something was helpful for your next vid.
It was pretty good riding… I also agree that it could have been more exciting with a bit better filming/editing job though… Just try a few more shooting styles and locations… That would probably help a lot.