thread of decent freestyles

i just flowed this and thought it was ok.

i was chosen from the best
chosen from the rest
best respect
my heart is broken in my chest
i spit and people open ears and talk less
open and listen
hopin im risen
from outta the ashes chosen comin on a mission
i draw people to the cause like fission
haters block my vision
but i go and blow on and release these emissions
through freestyle ambissions

if u can write a freestlye (not a poem) post it.

Isn´t freestyles when you make up the rhymes as you rap?
If you have the lyrics before it´s not freestyles?

lol, i wrote it is i thought it. “virtual freestyle” they do it on the bboy forums all the time. sometimes theres even battles its kinda cool.