First Video, need constructive criticism

Hi everyone,
this is our first vid and we need some comments and criticism. Please help us to improve and upload more vids.

Try to get you seat outs down one handed and try and hop less as well.

Riding was pretty good. Going backward down the stairs was probably my favorite.
Good variety of locations.
The main criticism would be the prehopping. It looks particularily bad on film and disrupts the pace of a video. Try to nail each trick and move onto the next. Or edit the prehops out.
To make the film more interesting, try to capture some outtakes. Some bloopers, or other stuff going on around the video.

Agree. Apart from that I liked the vid.