Comic Finished.

Hey guys! Happy Thanksgiving to those celebrating it. I just finished my first comic and want to see what you guys think, its titled: Free Stuff.
http://warrantynowvoid.com/images/wtf/hmmm/comic1.htm

Please discuss (note, those sensitive to political matters should not view)

On another note, hows everyones new KHs working out? While I can’t afford the whole uni I’ve got the street saddle coming in from Darren soon. I’m excited to see how it affects sif on my current trials uni compared to the tradition fusion saddle.

Brian, congratulations on your first foray into political cartooning. Just a suggestion, dear, but I think your work will have greater credibility if it is free from obvious grammatical errors. In both instances where you use the word “theres”, the sentence structure would indicate you are using it as a contraction of “there is”. Correct usage in that case would dictate an apostrophe: “there’s”.

Good luck!

MA

Thank you for bringing that to my attention, I’ll be fixing it soon.