Me and my friend Cassidy have created a cooking show called “Cass’ Kitchen.” We just finished the first episode, it is 10:53. Please watch it and let me know what you think. Any kind of advice or criticism is appreciated as we plan to make improved episodes in the future.
I liked it, good filming and good job explaining. A couple things: Cass’ should be Cass’s (the only time you have just an apostrophe at the end of a word is if it’s a plural, not a name). Also, it would be nice if you put the ingredients or recipe or something in the description box so you don’t have to go back and find the place in the video if you forgot something. And the way you say “pasta” is kind of annoying 
But good job!
Actually if a noun ends in an “s” you can just put an apostrophe after it to show possession. It isn’t only if something is plural.
We are going to put a detailed recipe in the description soon.
Also, I’m not the person in the video. That is my friend, Cassidy. I did all of he filming and editing.
Thanks for watching and commenting.
i only watched a little bit of it, as a courtesy view, but i really liked it. I love the filming/editing style. Really good! 
if i was into cooking, i’d love to watch more. Youve got something good going there man, keep up the good work :), props to Cassidy as well, hes really good on camera. I liked it a lot.
Just a tip, maybe put a mic on him to increase audio quality, i mean, other than that its really perfect, and thats not even something i really minded. Great job man!
Thanks dude, yeah I would love a tie clip mic. My camera doesn’t have a mic line in though so it wouldn’t work so well. I am planning to get a new camera this summer and a line in is definitely on my wanted feature list.