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Joyous riding atop one wheel Down the hill I go Sights and sounds and smells abound Down the hill I go Flying through the air I see Ground rushing up to me No more thoughts of sights and sounds Ground rushing up to me Blood and bruises on my legs Limping up the hill I go Joy is gone, replaced by pain Limping up the hill I go Okay, I have no idea how to write poetry. I have no interest in poetry. The above took about 10 minutes. Don't judge it too harshly. |
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2007-05-30, 12:17 AM
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haha that was funny.
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2007-05-30, 01:28 AM
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You're pretty good Uni57. You should consider writing more. I know you have no passion for it, but you have got some talent. I had a good laugh after reading it.
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2007-05-30, 02:15 AM
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Ok here's one I just wrote rather quickly. It's based on my elementary school days. (Not very fun times for sure!
 ) "Be yourself" by Terry Peterson 5/29/07 So long ago, though it still seems aloof, When we played after school, and smoked on the roof They expelled me for joking, and riding my board And tried hard to “mold” me, by quoting the Lord And still to this day I remain an outcast, In their eyes at least--but not mine… If there’s one thing I’ve learned, It’s to just be yourself, savoring life like a good glass of wine! Last edited by MuniAddict; 2007-05-30 at 02:20 AM. |
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2007-05-30, 02:21 AM
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I really like it terry.
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2007-05-30, 02:22 AM
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2007-05-30, 02:28 AM
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OOO yeah nice... BTW I am michael.
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2007-05-30, 02:38 AM
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Ok here's another one that I just wrote, this time I purposely didn't rhyme and just kindof put down thoughts as they came. Kinda personal thoughts, but hey that's poetry sometimes, right?"Look back no more" by Terry Peterson 5/29/07 Alone is my life, away from the crowd Coming out of my shell trying to connect How can I relate to a world so removed? How can life find me when I can’t find myself? I want so deeply to give love and be loved I’ve been there before but can’t quite remember Blocking out the pain of loss, and her beautiful face I must resign myself to a lonely existence Accepting that life is in its endgame But I did have one true love, which has long past And for the rest of my days I will look back no more… Last edited by MuniAddict; 2007-05-30 at 02:44 AM. |
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2007-05-30, 02:44 AM
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Sounds good its cool many call me bob... I wonder why lol...
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2007-05-30, 04:12 PM
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Ok, a happy one this time!
"My playground" by Terry Peterson 5/30/07
The mountains’ my playground, a place to unwind Where negative thoughts are left far behind I’m one with my muni, and find strength from within As adrenaline, ‘dorphins begin to kick in We’re shreddin’ the trail all rocky and loose Although it’s built strong, it can take my abuse Muni’s engrained and a part of my life, Without it I guess I’d consider a wife But until then I say, I will always be here Just me and my Muni, without any fear Exploring new vistas and lush mountain sides It's the best "high" by far, that nature provides Last edited by MuniAddict; 2007-05-30 at 04:18 PM. |
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2007-05-30, 09:06 PM
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Poetry is for little fifi boys...
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2007-05-30, 09:11 PM
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Hmmmmm.... Maybe I should at some point put some of my poetry up... I don't know tho I'm not very good at it...
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2007-05-30, 09:39 PM
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Of creative, artistic expression, you only deride, and show your mean side by taking this act of agression... Written by Terry Peterson, 5/30/07 Haha, nothing personal, just having fun at your expense! Damn, I'm good!  Here, I'll start....+1!
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2007-05-30, 09:46 PM
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2007-05-30, 09:49 PM
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lol Uni57 that was great for only ten minutes of thinking.
I used to like poetry untill i found out that there are poems that dont have to rhyme or follow rules. Then everything became a poem, i began speaking in verse and it all got quite our of hand. Now i seldom rhyme
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